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Okay, please note that I am NOT a photographer, so there won't be any intelligent thoughts on f-stops or such; just a subjective judgme...


Okay, I will take a shot at this. You have been very generous with your work, so if my few words help at all, I'm glad to offer them. B...

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Okay, please note that I am NOT a photographer, so there won't be any intelligent thoughts on f-stops or such; just a subjective judgment of the image.
Judgment: it sure works for me! Yes, it's simple, which can be a virtue if that's what you intend. Some shoots are so overtly stylized that they distract too much from the model. And this is a model from whom I want no distractions!
She's a beauty, and her pose, combined with a rather enthusiastic facial expression, helps make the shot. I admire her bravery in wearing such steamy lingerie, as well! The mesh bra that exposes her amazing breasts, and the panties designed to cover everything BUT her womanhood, are amazing, and she is courageous and confident to pose so calmly in them. The lighting flatters her, adding a hint of muscle tone but not creating unflattering bits of shadow.
Sure, this is basic, but wonderfully so, with sultry lingerie on a lovely model!
Okay, I will take a shot at this. You have been very generous with your work, so if my few words help at all, I'm glad to offer them. Before I continue, I should emphasize that I am not a photographer, so I won't pretend to know the technical terms; just offer a critique of the aesthetics as I perceive them.

Natalia is a stunningly beautiful model, a fact helped along by her open-cup bra. I love them for the way they support yet offer up an even better view than full nudity might. The tone of the fabric nicely matches the setting, with the emphasis on grey and beige/brown. The light sets off her skin nicely, though the focus is a tiny bit too soft for my taste. I understand what you were doing here, and it isn't a bad idea; I just feel it resulted in washing out her face and hair a little too much. That is especially important for me, since Natalia adopts such a charming pose; not naive, exactly, but perhaps surprised or confused by something she has heard or seen. It adds a delicious innocence to her sensual appearance.

I like the wood tones (all of my own furniture has a natural look, and my bookshelves have only a polyurethane to enhance the warm glow and protect the wood). Again, the nature of wood adds to the natural feel of this work. Another plus.

Overall, the shot is a little too soft and washed-out, but otherwise well-done. Please thank the model for me, if you will.
JC 191 by byakurai1313

Please, if you don't already, read my friend byakurai1313 's latest entry in the Just Caitlin strip. It's been building to this moment for a while, and had some belly laughs only recently, but this made me choke up and find no words to comment. All I could think was "tell the folks!" so I'm telling the folks.

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I was born, mostly but not very well and in need of repair already. I've always been a little out-of-phase with everyone else, but at least that can be a plus in writing...
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JC 191 by byakurai1313

Please, if you don't already, read my friend byakurai1313 's latest entry in the Just Caitlin strip. It's been building to this moment for a while, and had some belly laughs only recently, but this made me choke up and find no words to comment. All I could think was "tell the folks!" so I'm telling the folks.

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Rob66 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2016
Thank you very much for watching.  I hope you'll enjoy my posts!
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Mr-Timeshadow Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2016
I have always appreciated your work over at Yahoo, so I am amazed I didn't know you were here until now. I look forward to your work here...
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Rob66 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2016
I've been active here since spring 2015. I'm glad you enjoy the Yahoo posts and hope this will be as fun  :)  
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DestroXXIV Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the watch!
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remyfotos89 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016
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3DErotic Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2016  Professional General Artist
Watcher Girl bigger by 3DErotic  
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DanielGrant39 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2016  Professional General Artist
Thanks for the watch.
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Mr-Timeshadow Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2016
Thank you for your intriguing story! It has an interesting art style, and I like the patience and subtlety of the storytelling. I already look forward to each update!
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DanielGrant39 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2016  Professional General Artist
Thanks.  I'll try a page a day.
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Tsinji Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you for the watch!
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